I'd like your opinions on romanization!
Here's the consonant inventory for Erdán:
| Labials | Dentals | Palatals | Velars | Pharyngeal | Glottal | |
Plosives | p | t | | k | | ʔ | |
Fricatives | v [β] | s d [ð] | š [ʃ] | g [ɣ] | | | |
Nasals | m | n | | | | | |
Liquids | | l r | | | | | |
Semivowels | w | | y [j] | | ʕ | | |
The values are those of the IPA except where noted.
The vowels are
a e i o u, all of these with their IPA vowels, execpt u sometimes realized [ɯ] according to vowel harmony. There's also a tone system that's not entirely worked out yet.
Most consonants can be syllabic. These are often realized with a very short version of the following vowels.
A few examples:
šlosyuʕá [ʃǒ.los.ju˦˥.ʕa˥] 'of the factories'
Arʔašóma [ar.ʔa˦˥.ʃo˥ma˥˩] (a city name)
o nóše sgrašše sòvr o nóše aldúše ì mʕigi [o no˦.ʃe˥˩ săɣ.raʃ.ʃe so˩βŏr o no˦.ʃe˥˩ a˥˩l.ðɯ˥.ʃe˥˩ i꜖m.ʕiɣi] 'My cigarette smoke mixed with the smoke of my .38.'
Nnodsmè ʕOndnò mkos šés [nǒ.noð.sĕ.me˩ ʕon.dǒ.no˩ mǒ.kos ʃe˦˥s] 'Nnodson ʕOndne says hello'
Teʕ vràda vošʔo! [teʕ βăra꜖ða βoʃ.ʔo] 'I find you remarkably unpleasant, besides I have it on very good authority that your sister is a lady of very loose morals.'
Now that romanization is perfectly serviceable for conlanging.
The problem is, I'd like to use the conworld for fiction writing, at which point I believe having Nnodson ʕOndne and his friend Goʔdkon driving the mean streets of Arʔašóma might be a bit taxing for the reader.
Any ideas on how I could make this a little palatable? If at all possible, I'd like to keep the language somewhat alien sounding. I'm tempting to go the pulp SF route and just use apostrophes whenever possible, but I'd like to have your opinion on that.