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Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2024 2:27 am
by xxx
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him.
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(you having to say the current position of the man of gray, this man indicated by words by necessity on my part...)

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2024 12:06 pm
by jal
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him. - Celeborn, The Fellowship of the Ring
Yu tel mi a wo pah Gandaf de, kos mi won tok pon im fo so. - Kelebohn, Pahti a Ring


JAL

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2024 5:28 pm
by bradrn
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him. - Celeborn, The Fellowship of the Ring
Using an older language for this, because I feel it’s much better-suited than my latest one for weighty Tokien-esque utterances:

Athempāmpunīthən, Kāntal rəsanunathaŋkan, wərēꞵanəthēyochizamicīsha.

/ˈaɹeˌmpaːmpuˌniːɹən | ˈkaːntal rəˈsanuˌnaɹaˌŋkan | wəˈreːβanəˌɹeːjoɰiˌzamiˌciːɕa/
|əʷ-ə-tə-e-mpə-am-punī-tən, Kantal rəʷ-sə-nu-nə-tham-kəŋ, wə-riaʷ-maⁿ-əʷ-tha-e-yo-kizəm-ic-isa|
3s.O-1s.IO-2s.A-NP-IRR-BEN-say-IMP, Gandalf 3s.A-stand-LOC-MED-is-OBJ, 1s.A-INT-PFV-[3s.O-go-NP-COM-speak-ACT]-want

(Also, it may be worth noting that this is specifically from the movie of this title, not the book.)

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2024 8:58 am
by Travis B.
bradrn wrote: Wed Jun 12, 2024 5:28 pm |əʷ-ə-tə-e-mpə-am-punī-tən, Kantal rəʷ-sə-nu-nə-tham-kəŋ, wə-riaʷ-maⁿ-əʷ-tha-e-yo-kizəm-ic-isa|
  • display (trans.), nih
  • block (n.), akha
  • human, sooru
  • fake, false, gaw
Nihtaleeye qo niina akhatam.
display-PASS-INST-PRES PROX.S.INAN many block-GEN-P
That looks like lots of blocks.

Gadiya xacakam yohlaa sooru gaw.
exist-DAT-PAT.3.P.INAN write-NOM.AGT-P bad-P human fake
Android has bad fonts.

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2024 9:32 am
by Ares Land
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him. - Celeborn, The Fellowship of the Ring

Twura lasa Gandalf per neɬa yaniθa yaʔiwar itɓa

twur-a
tell\IMP-1s.POSS
lasa
where
Gandalf
PN
per
for
neɬa
greatly
ya-niθa
1s-desire\PRS
ya-ʔiwar
1s-speak\PRS
itɓa
with-3s.POSS

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2024 12:18 pm
by hwhatting
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him. - Celeborn, The Fellowship of the Ring
Fá mai pér is su Gandalfus, wit sam immu flóditen pil fedí - Celebornus, Uf toyé crachar cumpuntié libré
say-2SG.PRES.IPV 1SG-DAT where be-3SG.PRES.ACT.CLIT ART-M.SG.NOM Gandalf-NOM, for with 3SG.M-INSTR speak-INF very wish-1SG.PRES.ACT - Celeborn-NOM, about ART-M.F.LOC ring-SG.GEN fellowship-SG.LOC book-SG.LOC
Tell me, where is the Gandalf, for with him to speak very I desire - Celeborn, In the book about the Fellowship of the Ring.

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2024 9:52 am
by Kesshin
Part of a story I'm currently writing:
Long ago, a Mortal was found sneaking around God's Palace, looking at things never meant to be seen by mortal eyes.
Daas:
Zui'u, hya ez ze'du da le jon'uzu lu biviti lau pai Oo'dio pe Ra'tekae'dai, de joiz lu we'joiz'ron je'ke.
/zu:iʔu hyɑ ɛʒ zɛʔdu dɑ lɛ jonʔu:zu lu biviti lɑu pɑi o:ʔdio pɛ rɑʔtekɑɛʔdɑi de joiz lu wɛʔjoizʔron jɛʔkɛ/
In ancient times, a mortal was seen sneaking in the Highest King's Palace, seeing things not meant to be seen.
More: show
Zui'uancient, hyaone ezmaybe ze'dudeath daperson leSUBJ jon'uzusee.PST.PEJ luVERB bivitisneak lauANIMATE+VERB paiat Oo'dioking(holy) peowns Ra'tekae'dairoyal+house+big, desubj reminder joizsee.PRES luVERB we'joiz'ronnot+see.PRES+decree je'kething.

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2024 1:23 pm
by xxx
Long ago, a Mortal was found sneaking around God's Palace, looking at things never meant to be seen by mortal eyes.
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(man very past in house of the one above all, this man seeing things having to not be seen...)

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2024 2:47 am
by quinterbeck
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him. - Celeborn, The Fellowship of the Ring
Hau ougo, gen rug Gandalhu hilha, med nona magweah araug houhai
Hau
HORT
ougo,
tell
gen
Q
rug
LOC
Gandalhu
Gandalf
hir-ha,
place-what
med
because
non-a
EXP-1s
magwe-eh
want-very
araug
speak
houh-ai
ALL-RECP

Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him

--Gellemorno, Neonye eun Reggei
Gellemorno,
Celeborn
Neonye
group
eun
COM
Reggei
ring

--Celeborn, Fellowship of the Ring

Re: Translation challenge thread

Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2024 7:52 am
by Imralu
Man in Space wrote: Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:54 pm Tell me, where is Gandalf, for I much desire to speak with him. - Celeborn, The Fellowship of the Ring
Tobarese:
Mehúlē mulášaggándauh, žéŋgebiaggabúbō múlozókō nā.

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m<eh>úl        -ē  m<ul>á      -š  -ā- gándauh    | žég      -ŋéb    -iā-  g    -<ab>  <ub>  -ō  múl      -o-  zók    -ō  n        -ā
use.mouth<JUSS>-R4 be.what<LOC>-POL-R2-be.Gandalf | be.reason-be.said-FACT-cause-<very><want>-R3 use.mouth-LK1-use.ear-R3 accompany-R2