Zompist Bboard Again

rotting bones wrote: ↑Sun Mar 12, 2023 11:40 am Thanks guys, I feel like I'm letting you down with this one: https://themostholyspinozistchurchofut. ... f/sermon-2

No, no, at all. Do you have a specific story in mind for these sermons? It's interesting the way the second one references the first.

Yes, I also begin to find the overarching plot that seems to be developing intriguing.

I'm afraid that, since I don't know how to run a church, this thing has turned into an unintentional web novel unless someone else gives me ideas. I have notes about where the plot will go, but I rearrange everything with every sermon. I'm probably committed to the Cosmic Hunt motif by now.

I fully support our most holy faith presenting a web novel in place of an ordinary sermon.

Rounin Ryuuji wrote: ↑Mon Mar 13, 2023 9:27 pm I fully support our most holy faith presenting a web novel in place of an ordinary sermon.

Thanks, I did post a new chapter. I'm too ashamed of having written it to give a link here.

rotting bones wrote: ↑Sun Mar 19, 2023 12:22 pm

Rounin Ryuuji wrote: ↑Mon Mar 13, 2023 9:27 pm I fully support our most holy faith presenting a web novel in place of an ordinary sermon.

Thanks, I did post a new chapter. I'm too ashamed of having written it to give a link here.

Feel no shame for your own writing.

Rounin Ryuuji wrote: ↑Sun Mar 19, 2023 12:23 pm Feel no shame for your own writing.

Well, maybe someone will suggest improvements? https://themostholyspinozistchurchofut. ... f/sermon-3

Nah, I just want to see the rest of the story

That was a lovely sermon. I begin to feel the intellectual love of God seeping in.

Chapter 4: https://themostholyspinozistchurchofut. ... f/sermon-4

This might finally be the point where my ambition surpasses my writing ability.