Moose-tache wrote: ↑Mon Feb 07, 2022 12:59 am
How do different poetic meters affect you?
Iambic pentameter feels "invisible" to me — not in a bad way, but it lets the words, in my mind at least, run on at a comfortable pace. It also sees a lot of usage across different historical periods
Chaucer, c. 1390
In th' olde dayes of the Kyng Arthour,
Of which that Britons speken greet honour...
Shakespeare, c. 1590
When to the sessions of sweet silent thought
I summon up remembrance of things past...
Charlotte Smith, c. 1780
... The sea no more its swelling surge confines,
But o'er the shrinking land sublimely rides...
It also places emphasis on the final syllable, and so the rhyme can possibly freel a bit more pronounced (as opposed to a trochaic or dactyllic metre, where you're rhyming unstressed syllables).
Trochaic metre can feel a bit "faster" because you do start on the stress. Nursery rhymes and cackling incantations in it also often drop off the last unstressed syllable, so you get essentially "troche-trochee-amphibrach", note —
Hickory dickory dock
The mouse ran up the clock
This is probably because trochaic metre in English will tend to rely on difficult-to-perform
rime riche; Shakespeare has two lines in trochaic tetrameter at the beginning of the witches' song, then shifts to the trochee-trochee-amphibrach thing that "Hickory Dickory Dock" does:
Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Fillet of a fenny snake,
In the caldron boil and bake;
Eye of newt and toe of frog,
Wool of bat and tongue of dog,
Adder's fork and blind-worm's sting,
I notice that iambs tend to lend themselves to pentameter, and trochees to tetrameter.
Breaking the metre a little does not have any disorienting effect when I read it — note that the lines from Charlotte Smith are taken from an "Elegiac Sonnet" that is not in perfect iambic pentameter all through:
Press'd by the Moon, mute arbitress of tides, (spondee-iamb, spondee-dibrach-iamb)
While the loud equinox its power combines, (spondee-spondee-iamb-iamb-iamb)
The sea no more its swelling surge confines, (iamb-iamb-iamb-iamb-iamb)
But o'er the shrinking land sublimely rides. (iamb-iamb-iamb-iamb-iamb)
When writing in English specifically, a line of verse will
usually, for lack of a better word, "want" to end on a stressed syllable, because this makes it easier for it to rhyme. We already notice how in metrically trochaic lines, ending on an amphibrach rather than two full trochees is common, because English does not rhyme that well when compared with languages with lots of terminal open syllables and more limited vowel inventories.
...[i]n real world English, with our stress-timed emphasis, a dactylic or anapestic meter actually goes faster.
Dactyllic metre is overall rare in English (I had to go digging for examples, and found extremely few), though combinations of Dactyls and Trochees seem to be somewhat more common:
Robert Browning, c. 1845:
"Just for a handful of silver he left us... (dactyl-dactyl-dactyl-trochee)
Found the one gift of which fortune bereft us," (dactyl-dactyl-dactyl-trochee)
Do you think slavish dedication to a rhyming scheme is wonderful and uplifting, or is it just for try-hards and dirty limericks?
"Slavish" dedication, I wouldn't think of as necessary (I think line-final assonance can be just as effective as rhyming, and opens up more possibilities for pairing words unexpectedly, rather than being stuck with the same few true rhymes), but having some sort of patterning, I tend to prefer.