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Game of Thrones: House Lannister

I've been using the DVD extras for Game of Thrones to add new words to the Classical Phaeroian language. Not too bad an idea to show what I've got, right?

Rhautoios-i Lannister	House Lannister
Kerna opagil-e koallar kanar, hokton mybdaton Hond-e Heuzan gresanon rhamon, Mabdal-i Kastarilar, ta-e hykem-e apsoir-o Rhautoios-i Lannister. Tan zan Lannisportar, dolai zor-o Ouesteros kana, pakhax-i ledon, rhamyr-to, trannar zoral-i Lannisteia-to.	"On the far western coast of the continent, high atop a rocky promontory overlooking the Sunset Sea, sits Casterly Rock, ancestral seat of House Lannister. Below it lies Lannisport, one of the great cities of Westeros, a centre for trade, culture, and the great Lannister fleet."
Belphar oipynat-o sauron-to piphanos-to Ptora kanalon, ion ta koualar oigar klou-e Ouesteron kanon. Kerth-i belpha oinauka Mabdal-i Kastarilas zas hymia-ka, ion tan Rhautoios-i Lannistela oumital-i rhautouin kyloin-ka. Elos Rhautoios-i Lannister prathos-i esmoura zougain pynat-o rhautouis rhais eiele, aras Hindala kiaiar zonda Mabdal-i Kastarilan paran dorilitho.	"There are a number of gold and silver mines in the Westerlands, making it the richest region in all of Westeros. One of the most productive mines lies beneath Casterly Rock itself, making House Lannister the wealthiest of all the noble Houses. This allows House Lannister to finance many endeavours of other noble Houses; even the King himself has sought credit from Casterly Rock from time to time."
Mas Lannisteia Ikhlauian Andalian parian-to pistromon maunon mytabidos, gougmaris teurakas Lannen Zageun-to. Bzotonis balanonis, Lannos, euskalonis khainis eugnanis, Rhautoios-i Kastarilen paren Dreu-i Nagritoin aphoin Mabdal-i Kastarilan siaxer. Lannisteiar, Hindi-o Mabdar, synsidi-to thynnoin aphain, sytir-to ealon iktere-na eka-i Ter Insida stara.	"We Lannisters claim our descent from the Andal invaders, and through the female bloodline, Lann the Clever. According to the legend, Lann, using only his wits, won Casterly Rock from the noble House of Casterly during the Age of Heroes. The Lannisters reigned as Kings of the Rock for thousands of years, and worked to make it the envy of the rest of the Seven Kingdoms."
Zgeun-e hindia mauia sianses-ka, oios Aegon Targaerien, aras tath-i Aegon Kolixaros, khillaunen khainen hynen Ouesteros-i siakhen. Hindar asikhal-i Mabdar, Loren Lannister, Hindal-i Aigas Mernen Gardenera siaramphon. Nyphnania, zankor phaia hymia, doun-i Targaerienoi poroi rhopho-e sokhen.	"Our time as kings ended, however, when Aegon Targaeryen, otherwise known as Aegon the Conqueror, arrived in Westeros with his army. The last King of the Rock, Loren Lannister, joined forces with King Mern Gardener, the King of the Reach. Together, with sixty thousand men, they met the Targaeryen host in open battle."
Gdir man ebala, Aegon kylx-i in galmekoin khain henthen, hathnyx phaian bderanos. Tas isar silattha Thendal-i Thornar. Merner Hindala gidanos gynen eos-i hasthilana, Rhautoios-i Gardenela-to tara hymalon paskalon hasteptia. Iranos ensalon-to donsalon-to Targaerienois sygner, Loren zaragar sianisaproi-ka, kolaxeuran star-e Ouesteros Aegonis henyko-ka. Elos Lanisteiar hasorattha Nimia Kymiti-o Ptor-to Oupri-o Pagos-to. Otthoir aras khinn-e mythnas.	"History tells us that Aegon unleashed all three of his dragons, slaughtering four thousand men, at what came to be known as the Field of Fire. King Mern himself was burnt alive that day, and House Gardener turned to ash with him. Seeing both the threat and opportunity the Targaeryens represented, Loren wisely surrendered, and aided Aegon in his further conquest of Westeros. The Lannisters were thus appointed Lords Paramount of the Westerlands and Wardens of the West—titles we hold to this day."
Zyr igza. Zdethan-ni thepros-i hindia-ni rhautoien maun gazian einau. Zgeunair gdian mauian aphian oiai meus insenode mala malydia-si, timalia-si, hegia-si. Babala akala, Tytos Lannister, gasiodoas la-kathas hymas rhautoion mausa kiar nisadaulis-to, ibalanen kanen zagir eppithras nikadmeias-to. Oios khoikoutoi maui, Rheynei ta-o Kastamira, porrophos Lannisteian porian zonogo, phyltos iogis epapteros-i laionen asatthor. Anar, Tywin Lannister, khleu-e Kastamiran asastor-na, porrophoan tan insakes-na. Tais eugnais atolia hanakter-na, zoara maua lys tynsaias-na. Aras phimen-i Rheynei ta-o Kastamiran ablanan rhitauma hastilagri. Goulias, la-Rheyneir thyzanoir staroir.	"Let us be clear, though. It is neither luck nor royal favour that makes our House prosperous. There have been times in our history where some have thought us weak, lazy, or opulent. My father, Tytos Lannister, nearly bankrupted our House with his poor investments, and allowed himself to be mocked openly at court. When our vassal, the Reynes of Castamere, dared to rise up against the Lannisters, they learned how dangerous it can be to taunt a lion. I, Tywin Lannister, led the assault on Castamere to put down this rebellion. I made an example of them, to anyone who doubts our might. They even made a quaint song about the fates of the Reynes of Castamere. Sadly, there are no Reynes left to hear it.
Akas Laionar sauril-i Lannisteia khinn-e zilabra-ka zilinia-ka Ter Insidan tygan. Balioir mauir, Birema Thazyko. Zyr balioir sadoir kitroas-li Lai-i Mabdal-i Kastarilan times-li: Lannister Lazir Rhakallia.	"Today the golden lion of Lannister is rightly admired and feared throughout the Seven Kingdoms. Our Words are: Hear Me Roar. But there are other words that should be remembered when crossing a lion of Casterly Rock: A Lannister Always Pays His Debts."

So! What do you think?

Congratulations for getting so far that you can translate texts this long and with complicated words! Other than that it's hard to comment, not knowing anything about the conlang.

And here we have the first full poem in Phaeroian!

Phaeroian

English

Biremaxa, samar, tal-i psaras ekanos, Prede, samar, hypreiain gain, kheurd-i nykhthanos! Kyler egidi, loater kylmeter atas, Kai hyldes-i hyptaron tintos oiphyldatas? Neskos, knephe rhykhoira zara, magino-ka Tais, tailai, tregaloi-to, nez-o iroka. Apharas, aphallan gan, zinoi kiotanoi Hyraknephe, rhakronisis-ka phroiastanoi. Azout-e zouia, stogania throbania, zeknosis Nax-i nadaxanoi dradanoin, oiormosis. Thyzo! Thynno-o balioi, tamian-to gaian, Kai adarakoin tithazyko, akoin, zogaian? Tabaona thnas, ion tather tisar naseke.

"Roar forth, arrow of longing love, Fly, arrow, across the fortress, the heart of my beloved! All things live, not a soul here is motionless, Do you doubt the hues of this gem of a garden? Friend, sit beneath the olive tree, and be restored By these roses, these lilies, these dappled pigments. Meanwhile, in the grove, the singing birds Perch in perfect pattern, keeping secrets. In time, a meeting of the winds, cascading and dancing; So skillfully they keep safe all echoes under the sky. Listen! Millennia of words, amidst the leaves— Can't you hear my earnest words, my efforts? Take my hand, for it is your essence that I love."

This verse relies on three elements: lines of thirteen syllables (and a verse thirteen lines long - one for each of the twelve Virtues, and the last for God); line-final rhymes (more or less - note also that the rhymes are always two syllables); and line-internal alliteration of the first syllable of the word (except if that word is kai, which is used to mark questions.)

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Thoughts?