Apparently incorrect comma usage
Apparently incorrect comma usage
I've seen this kind of thing a lot, in publications printed over decades, where one comma is used where logic, common sense, and good taste would specify none or two:
"The nasty, sadistic conlanger bound the morphemes"
The second comma should go after "sadistic". Of what rule of punctuation am I ignorant?
"The nasty, sadistic conlanger bound the morphemes"
The second comma should go after "sadistic". Of what rule of punctuation am I ignorant?
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Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
Umm this is correct with one comma, as "nasty" and "sadistic" are two separate adjectives that both modify "conlanger".alice wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2026 2:30 pm I've seen this kind of thing a lot, in publications printed over decades, where one comma is used where logic, common sense, and good taste would specify none or two:
"The nasty, sadistic conlanger bound the morphemes"
The second comma should go after "sadistic". Of what rule of punctuation am I ignorant?
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Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
Why is it then that every time I see it a little voice in my head says "There's a comma missing there!"? Bad education?
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Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
because another use of a comma is to indicate an inserted phrase or clause, in which case it goes on both sides of the insert to offset it: The banker, who had only recently been hired, was saddened to learn he was being laid off. it sounds like your brain is seeing the first example and incorrectly flagging it as the second
Last edited by Emily on Mon Jul 06, 2026 3:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
Well, whenever I see two commas there a little voice in my head says ‘What uneducated barbarian put that extra comma in?’. I guess I now know the answer…
(In my view, the issue with a comma between the adjective and noun is easier to see when there’s only a single adjective: *‘The sadistic, conlanger bound the morphemes.’.)
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Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
Perhaps, like me, you're taking a pause, after sadistic...
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chicago manual of style, 13th edition, section 5.45:
Separate two or more adjectives by commas if each modifies the noun alone:If the first adjective modifies the idea expressed by the combination of the second adjective and the noun, no comma should be used:
- Shelley had proved a faithful, sincere friend.
- Rocco had said that it was going to be a long, hot summer.
- He had no patience with the traditional political institutions of his country.
- Blanche stood beside a tall blue spruce.
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That's how I always understood it, and I personally normally don't care much about such style guides.Emily wrote: ↑Tue Jul 07, 2026 3:19 am chicago manual of style, 13th edition, section 5.45:Separate two or more adjectives by commas if each modifies the noun alone:If the first adjective modifies the idea expressed by the combination of the second adjective and the noun, no comma should be used:
- Shelley had proved a faithful, sincere friend.
- Rocco had said that it was going to be a long, hot summer.
- He had no patience with the traditional political institutions of his country.
- Blanche stood beside a tall blue spruce.
Yaaludinuya siima d'at yiseka wohadetafa gaare.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
I would say it was a result of overdone prescriptivism. (It looks to me like an aping of Latin's rule to join adjectives with et or -que.) I was taught to put the comma in, but I normally reject that training. When I think about it, which I usually don't, I tend to follow the Chicago Manual of Style's advice in this matter. (I came up with the conditional rule independently - I hadn't seen my considered view advocated before.) What's a nice (= pleasant) sadistic conlanger, as opposed to a nasty one? One that tortures your enemies?
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Maybe because the comma also represents a slight pause in speech, and when you speak the sentence, you're doing so in such a way that there's a slight pause between both pairs of words. Thus, you naturally want to put a comma between both pairs.
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whatever the rules,
spoken language is my only compass,
for writing...
(unlike conlanging...)
spoken language is my only compass,
for writing...
(unlike conlanging...)
Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
I just encountered an issue with comma usage and the order of modifiers. To Raphael's review of presidential candidates for the USA, I wanted to add something along the lines of "The Democrats need a candidate with the strength of character to presidentially personally slay the conservative majority on the Supreme Court". I rejected this, because "personally presidentially" felt far more natural, though I'm not sure about the desirability of having a comma. Eventually, I found the best wording so far to be the somewhat clumsy "The Democrats need a candidate with the strength of character to presidentially slay the conservative majority on the Supreme Court personally".
FWIW, I did contemplate the possibility of Trump shooting dead a justice or two at the recent State of the Union. I obviously don't know whether the thought crossed their minds, but I presume Trump could have been impeached and convicted if he had done so. I'm not sure whether he could then have been criminally committed.
FWIW, I did contemplate the possibility of Trump shooting dead a justice or two at the recent State of the Union. I obviously don't know whether the thought crossed their minds, but I presume Trump could have been impeached and convicted if he had done so. I'm not sure whether he could then have been criminally committed.
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Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
in my sophomore year of highschool, my english teacher taught1 that where commas are used to separate items in a list, american2 english does not put a comma after the final item, but that british2 english does. I have no idea the validity of this.alice wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2026 2:30 pm I've seen this kind of thing a lot, in publications printed over decades, where one comma is used where logic, common sense, and good taste would specify none or two:
"The nasty, sadistic conlanger bound the morphemes"
The second comma should go after "sadistic". Of what rule of punctuation am I ignorant?
1 to this day I've never trusted a single thing she taught, but it bears mentioning here.
2 my sophomore english teacher was also very much of the opinion that american english was the pure, superior version of english.
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After the final item? How can anyone put a comma after the final item?/ˌnɐˈɾɛndɚduːd/ wrote: ↑Fri Jul 17, 2026 12:15 pmin my sophomore year of highschool, my english teacher taught1 that where commas are used to separate items in a list, american2 english does not put a comma after the final item, but that british2 english does. I have no idea the validity of this.alice wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2026 2:30 pm I've seen this kind of thing a lot, in publications printed over decades, where one comma is used where logic, common sense, and good taste would specify none or two:
"The nasty, sadistic conlanger bound the morphemes"
The second comma should go after "sadistic". Of what rule of punctuation am I ignorant?
(A comma before the final item is a well-known American/British difference, but it goes the other way — see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma.)
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Re: Apparently incorrect comma usage
I had the exact same thought here.bradrn wrote: ↑Fri Jul 17, 2026 12:23 pmAfter the final item? How can anyone put a comma after the final item?/ˌnɐˈɾɛndɚduːd/ wrote: ↑Fri Jul 17, 2026 12:15 pmin my sophomore year of highschool, my english teacher taught1 that where commas are used to separate items in a list, american2 english does not put a comma after the final item, but that british2 english does. I have no idea the validity of this.alice wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2026 2:30 pm I've seen this kind of thing a lot, in publications printed over decades, where one comma is used where logic, common sense, and good taste would specify none or two:
"The nasty, sadistic conlanger bound the morphemes"
The second comma should go after "sadistic". Of what rule of punctuation am I ignorant?
(A comma before the final item is a well-known American/British difference, but it goes the other way — see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma.)
Yaaludinuya siima d'at yiseka wohadetafa gaare.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.