Yep, glad to see it! There's been a good bit of conlanging this year. It's fun to see.
Aw, shucks. Thanks!
You had me at "phonology"!!!
Yep, glad to see it! There's been a good bit of conlanging this year. It's fun to see.
Aw, shucks. Thanks!
Non-incorporated |
k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi alwika ja jambi
The merchant cut the cloth with a knife. |
Incorporated |
jambiwikak'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
The merchant knife-cut the cloth. |
jambiwikansatimak'alisanzuni qam umbabiwi
The merchant knife-cloth-cut. |
# | Realm | Description |
1 | Celestial People | elders, leaders, ancestors, helpful spirits |
2 | Aqueous People | women |
3 | Terran People | men |
4 | Celestial Animals | birds, flying insects |
5 | Aqueous Animals | fish, amphibians, marine mammals & reptiles |
6 | Terran Animals | mammals, reptiles |
7 | Aqueous Plants | fruits, vegetables,seaweed, food (aqueous sources) |
8 | Terran Plants | trees, bushes, grass, moss, food (celestial, terran, nether sources) |
9 |
Celestial Objects & Materials Aqueous Objects & Material Terran Objects & Material Nether Objects & Material |
clouds, moon, sun, stars, air, smoke, light liquids, pastes, shells, corals tools, stone, metal, wood weapons, coffins, darkness, fire |
10 |
Celestial Places Aqueous Places Terran Places Nether Places |
sky, heaven rivers, lakes, water mountains, hills, forests, valleys caves, graves |
11 | Celestial Abstractions | ideas, concepts |
12 | Aqueous Abstractions | states, qualities |
13 | Terran Abstractions | actions, events, times |
14 | Nether Abstractions | death, fear, disease |
15 | Nether Beings (people, animals, plants) | untouchables, maleficient spirits, crawling insects, bats, mushrooms, mold |
Not specifically, no. Or, it's not separate from the celestial/aqueous/terran/nether distinction. Each of the 15 classes I listed would have it's own pair of singular & plural affixes. Class 9 - the objects/materials - will probably have multiple affixes.
Oh, you traditional purist!bradrn wrote: ↑Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:23 pm
- Terminologically, I’d prefer terms which are less ‘poetic’ and more ‘academic’. You could use ‘heavenly’, ‘oceanic’, ‘earthly’, ‘danger/maleficient’, perhaps? Your categories are abstract enough that you could probably even get away with ‘Classes I, II, III, IV’, if you want. (An unimportant point, I know, but it’s bugging me )
This is actually quite helpful and a very good point! I've thought a little bit about the culture behind this language, but not with this crystal-clear type of focus. That's probably why I have had a hard time coming up with noun classes, since I don't have a super clear set of values & beliefs to base it on. It might be time to do a little research for that purpose.bradrn wrote: ↑Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:23 pm
- This point is one I’m a little uncertain about, but some parts of your classification strike me as somewhat Eurocentric. (Well, Middle-Eastern-centric, really.) For instance, how common exactly is it to associate heaven with good things and authority, while underground is associated with dangerous things? I can easily think of alternate assignments; for instance, a culture might associate the sky with wind, storm and lightning, while conceiving underground as the source of nourishment. (Note that that’s not a rhetorical question; I’m genuinely interested in knowing this!)
Thanks for clarifying! But in that case, is there any particular reason to analyse this as a system of 4x6 ‘superclasses’ rather than just as a collection of 15 noun classes?
Hmm, that ‘circumfix’ reference gives me an idea: why not make the plural affix a prefix, which cooccurs with the class suffix but itself varies with noun class? You could then merge some of the noun classes in the plural prefix, so the classifying suffix marks all classes but the plural prefix takes on a more limited set of values. This lets you do some interesting things: for instance, it could give you a way to morphologically mark your celestial/aqueous/terran/nether distinction, while keeping the fusional suffixes as is. That is, if your singular noun classes are something like this (making up some random affixes):The language is going to be entirely or very close to entirely suffixing, so the noun class affixes will feel different than Bantu classes. I'm thinking about making the plural affixes for each class be a circumfix. That would be another nod to Pedant's Proto-Haradrimic. That would be the only non-suffixes, unless I toss just a few prefixes into the derivation mix.
Class | Singular | Plural |
Celestial People | -ya | yo--ya |
Aqueous People | -ya | ji--ya |
Celestial Animals | -de | yo--de |
Aqueous Animals | -de | ji--de |
Celestial Animals | -ŋi | yo--ŋi |
Aqueous Animals | -ŋi | ji--ŋi |
Yes, that’s pretty much what I assumed when I saw that list. Maybe try delineating exactly which words fall into which categories? That might help with getting some better names. (For inspiration, I can suggest Dixon’s Dyirbal grammar; given ‘prototypical’ noun class members, Dyirbal has a set of metaphorical ‘transfer’ processes to assign class membership to non-prototypical nouns.)Oh, you traditional purist!bradrn wrote: ↑Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:23 pm
- Terminologically, I’d prefer terms which are less ‘poetic’ and more ‘academic’. You could use ‘heavenly’, ‘oceanic’, ‘earthly’, ‘danger/maleficient’, perhaps? Your categories are abstract enough that you could probably even get away with ‘Classes I, II, III, IV’, if you want. (An unimportant point, I know, but it’s bugging me )
I'm quite sure the names will change. I came up with this by stepping back from a simple list, which turned out too Bantu-ish. This is still close, but has at least some difference. I created a table with people/animals/plants/objects/places/abstractions on one axis and celestial/aqueous/terran/nether on the other. (Those were revised several times as well.) Once I had the table filled it, I changed it back to the list that you see here. This is why you're seeing "celestial people", etc.
Other than zompist’s Barakhinei, I don’t think I’ve seen any other conlang with gender differences before… I’d love to see more of this!Speaking of that, I'm toying with the idea of having differences in how people in the different classes utilize the other classes. For example, women might use different affixes or just 1 affix for everything in the nether "realm", while men might do the same for the celestial realm. There might be syntactic differences as well, or even different vocabulary, so this would be avoidance speech built into the classes. I haven't worked on those ideas much beyond what I just described. That might make the celestial/aqueous/terran/nether distinction more defined even if the distinction is not marked in the noun classes themselves.
Huh, that’s new… for someone who has almost never gotten to the ‘conculture’ stage of his conlanging, I find it somewhat strange to be complimented on my ‘crystal-clear focus’ on the topic!This is actually quite helpful and a very good point! I've thought a little bit about the culture behind this language, but not with this crystal-clear type of focus. That's probably why I have had a hard time coming up with noun classes, since I don't have a super clear set of values & beliefs to base it on. It might be time to do a little research for that purpose.bradrn wrote: ↑Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:23 pm
- This point is one I’m a little uncertain about, but some parts of your classification strike me as somewhat Eurocentric. (Well, Middle-Eastern-centric, really.) For instance, how common exactly is it to associate heaven with good things and authority, while underground is associated with dangerous things? I can easily think of alternate assignments; for instance, a culture might associate the sky with wind, storm and lightning, while conceiving underground as the source of nourishment. (Note that that’s not a rhetorical question; I’m genuinely interested in knowing this!)
As always, you’re very welcome! I’m always happy to give feedback. (Some would say I give too much of it! )Thanks for the feedback!
I'm not sure there's a reason to do so, no, but see comments below about the affix forms.bradrn wrote: ↑Fri Oct 09, 2020 9:20 am Thanks for clarifying! But in that case, is there any particular reason to analyse this as a system of 4x6 ‘superclasses’ rather than just as a collection of 15 noun classes?
(Actually, now that I think of it, what would you call those individual composable features? ‘Superclasses’ doesn’t sound right, but neither does anything else…)
Pedant did this a little bit with his class affixes, but the plurals were suffixes. So yeah, something in this regard is at least on my radar. What you list here is all really good variations to consider, so that will be quite useful.bradrn wrote: ↑Fri Oct 09, 2020 9:20 am Hmm, that ‘circumfix’ reference gives me an idea: why not make the plural affix a prefix, which cooccurs with the class suffix but itself varies with noun class? You could then merge some of the noun classes in the plural prefix, so the classifying suffix marks all classes but the plural prefix takes on a more limited set of values. This lets you do some interesting things: for instance, it could give you a way to morphologically mark your celestial/aqueous/terran/nether distinction, while keeping the fusional suffixes as is. That is, if your singular noun classes are something like this (making up some random affixes):
...
(You don’t have to do any of this, of course; I’m just trying to give some ideas to think about.)
This confuses me a little bit since I do have example (English) words in each category. Granted, it's sketchy, but it's there. More example words would of course maybe indicate names, but I have a fairly firm idea of what each category means. The Dyirbal transfer thing sounds interesting, though!bradrn wrote: ↑Fri Oct 09, 2020 9:20 am Yes, that’s pretty much what I assumed when I saw that list. Maybe try delineating exactly which words fall into which categories? That might help with getting some better names. (For inspiration, I can suggest Dixon’s Dyirbal grammar; given ‘prototypical’ noun class members, Dyirbal has a set of metaphorical ‘transfer’ processes to assign class membership to non-prototypical nouns.)
Happy to accommodate.... eventually! I think this may be a primarily matriarchal society, with maybe 60-70% of it's leadership being female.
Let me rephrase that: at the very least, it brings the issue into crystal-clear focus for me, even if it isn't clear for you.bradrn wrote: ↑Fri Oct 09, 2020 9:20 am Huh, that’s new… for someone who has almost never gotten to the ‘conculture’ stage of his conlanging, I find it somewhat strange to be complimented on my ‘crystal-clear focus’ on the topic!
(I’m not sure I would be able to help any more with this, though… I know too little about the cultures you cite as inspirations to be able to be of much use. I guess it’s time for me to buy more of zompist’s books then!)
Nope, it's all appreciated!
Interestingly, this was the terminology I originally used in my post, but then when I re-read it I changed it to ‘superclass’ since I thought that seemed more sensible.
Ah, sorry, they just sounded very vague from your brief distinctions.This confuses me a little bit since I do have example (English) words in each category. Granted, it's sketchy, but it's there. More example words would of course maybe indicate names, but I have a fairly firm idea of what each category means.bradrn wrote: ↑Fri Oct 09, 2020 9:20 am Yes, that’s pretty much what I assumed when I saw that list. Maybe try delineating exactly which words fall into which categories? That might help with getting some better names. (For inspiration, I can suggest Dixon’s Dyirbal grammar; given ‘prototypical’ noun class members, Dyirbal has a set of metaphorical ‘transfer’ processes to assign class membership to non-prototypical nouns.)
Quite all right; no apology necessary! This tells me I definitely need to elaborate more in future posts as I iterate. Of course, there's a balance to the presentation of the ideas since too much info can turn people away, too.
Labial | Coronal | Palatal | Dorsal | Gutteral | |
Stops | b p pʰ | d t tʰ | g k kʰ | ||
Affricates | d͡z t͡s t͡sʰ | d͡ʑ t͡ɕ t͡ɕʰ | |||
Fricatives | f | z s | ʑ, ɕ | x | h |
Nasals | m | n | ŋ | ||
Continuants | ɾ l | j | w |
Labial | Coronal | Palatal | Dorsal | Gutteral | |
Stops | b p ph | d t th | g k kh | ||
Affricates | dz ts tsh | j c ch | |||
Fricatives | f | z s | zh, sh | x | h |
Nasals | m | n | ng | ||
Continuants | r l | y | w |
Front | Mid | Back | |
Closed | i | u | |
Mid | e | o | |
Open | a |
Onset | Nucleus Vowel | |
C | + | i e a o u |
Cw | + | i ie ia io iu iao |
CG | + | e a o ei eo ai ao |
Cy | + | u ui ue ua uo uai |
lit’udawikamimutaqi qam ndaluwi ja untaqi alja umbabiwi alwika ja jambi
The man weapon-killed the merchant’s camel with a knife. |
k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
The merchant cut the cloth. |
miba ja umbabiwi
The merchant is quick. |
k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi almiba
The merchant cut the cloth and was quick. |
mibanun k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
Quickly, the merchant cut the cloth. |
k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi mibanun
The merchant cut the cloth quickly. |
k'alisi mibanun qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
The merchant - quickly - cut the cloth. |
k'alisi miba qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
The merchant was quick to cut the cloth. |
mibak'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
The merchant quick-cut the cloth. |
Quick terminological note: Usually, serial verbs are defined as sequences of verbs which (amongst other properties) cannot have a morphological marker of dependency inserted between them, so by most definitions these aren’t really serial verbs.Vardelm wrote: ↑Fri Oct 16, 2020 11:51 pm Serial verbs:
Verbs can appear as serial verbs. They appear right after each other at the start of the sentence; otherwise, they need to be connected with the linker al-.
The first verb in the serialization determines the required arguments for the sentence. Any successive verbs must refer to the same subject and (if transitive) to the same object. I'm not sure if successive verbs will be allowed to take only the 1st verb's object as an argument.
k'alisi mibanun qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi
- k'alis-i
- cut-SNG
- miba
- quickly
- qam
- 3P.ACT.DET
- umbabi-wi
- merchant-the.SNG
- ja
- 3P.STA.DET
- nsatim-i
- cloth-the.SNG
The merchant was quick cut the cloth.
Are you referring to the -i in k'alisi? If so, that's not a marker of dependency, but it's still a fair point since serial verbs should have the same TAM markings (although this isn't even technically TAM!).
Answer: yes, but I haven't thought through it much. I thought that coordinated sentences would use a particle that was different than the clitic al-, but realized al- did what I needed. I love these moments in conlanging when you "discover" something about your language!
It was almost 1:00 AM here, so the brain was starting to shut down. Yeah, that was a typo of omission, which I just corrected. I changed it to "The merchant was quick to cut the cloth", but I also considered "The merchant was quick and cut the cloth". Either work. Actually, all of these examples could easily be translated as "The merchant cut the cloth quickly", but I want to show a difference between them in English where possible.
No, I’m talking about al-. The idea is that it should be impossible to insert a linking marker, which is what al- seems to be here. (A natlang example: English sentences like ‘I’ll go do it now’ look a lot like SVCs, but aren’t analysed that way due to the fact that you can insert ‘and’ with no change in meaning.) I believe constructions like yours are most commonly called ‘converbs’, though I’m not entirely sure that’s correct.
Yep, this all sounds pretty normal for SVCs. (Your system reminds me of Skou in particular, which has similar differences in concord between its various inflectional categories.)This is going to be interesting to work out due to the amount of inflection Jin will have. Since the -i singulative marker codes a verb to be episodic, both verbs in a serial construction should probably have that. Also, the tense marking that I haven't talked about yet will need to be the same. There's a slew of inflectional prefixes, which I might only mark on the 1st verb in the chain, with the understanding that it affects both. Voice is partly derivational, so that will be allowed to be different, but with restrictions. I don't think you'll be able to combine a direct voice with a passive or inverse voice, for example. It remains to be worked out, of course.
‘Direct result’ is very common in SVCs. Usually it’s accomplished through switching subjects, along the lines of ‘He hit die it = He hit it; it die’. ‘Simultaneous actions’ seems a bit less common, though still attested. ‘Whole, connected event’ is a very common constraint on SVCs — often the event is restricted to a culturally common one.Answer: yes, but I haven't thought through it much. … I think they will be used for verbs that are parts of a whole, connected event. That could be simultaneous actions or where one is a direct result of the other.
Syntactically, this is attested e.g. in Oceanic. Semantically, not so much: verbs very commonly have different objects even when objects are shared syntactically. This is particularly common in resultatives such as the aforementioned ‘He hit die it’ — ‘hit’ has an object, which isn’t shared with ‘die’.My understanding is that - in some languages at least - serial verbs can have different objects. That's not the case here, so the verb will have to be very closely connected.
Ah, OK! Those are definitely not serial verbs. I see them being used for verbs where the subject and/or object are different than the main verb. This makes adjunct phrases (alwika jambi "using/with a knife") one of the primary uses.bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Oct 17, 2020 9:03 am No, I’m talking about al-. The idea is that it should be impossible to insert a linking marker, which is what al- seems to be here. (A natlang example: English sentences like ‘I’ll go do it now’ look a lot like SVCs, but aren’t analysed that way due to the fact that you can insert ‘and’ with no change in meaning.) I believe constructions like yours are most commonly called ‘converbs’, though I’m not entirely sure that’s correct.
I can always count on your research! I'll take at these, too, out of curiosity. That list will be helpful to wrap my head around types of serial constructions.bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Oct 17, 2020 9:03 am Yep, this all sounds pretty normal for SVCs. (Your system reminds me of Skou in particular, which has similar differences in concord between its various inflectional categories.)
‘Direct result’ is very common in SVCs. Usually it’s accomplished through switching subjects, along the lines of ‘He hit die it = He hit it; it die’. ‘Simultaneous actions’ seems a bit less common, though still attested. ‘Whole, connected event’ is a very common constraint on SVCs — often the event is restricted to a culturally common one.
If you’re looking for more inspiration, here’s some other common categories:
Hey, watch where you're swinging that research, mister!
Wait, I’m confused now… can you insert al- into the phrase kʼalisi miba, or is that impossible? From your post, it sounded like al- is required when the phrase doesn’t appear at the beginning of the sentence, but maybe I’m misunderstanding something…Vardelm wrote: ↑Sat Oct 17, 2020 9:21 amAh, OK! Those are definitely not serial verbs. I see them being used for verbs where the subject and/or object are different than the main verb. This makes adjunct phrases (alwika jambi "using/with a knife") one of the primary uses.bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Oct 17, 2020 9:03 am No, I’m talking about al-. The idea is that it should be impossible to insert a linking marker, which is what al- seems to be here. (A natlang example: English sentences like ‘I’ll go do it now’ look a lot like SVCs, but aren’t analysed that way due to the fact that you can insert ‘and’ with no change in meaning.) I believe constructions like yours are most commonly called ‘converbs’, though I’m not entirely sure that’s correct.
The only example I meant to be a serial verb was k'alisi miba "cut quick". I may have confused the issue since one of my other typos was there. I originally translated miba as "quickly", but to be consistent it should just be the stative verb "quick". I intend that serial verbs in Jin appear at the start of a sentence (or clause) and are not separated by any other words. The examples using al- are what I was considering "coordinated sentences".
You actually want to investigate this stuff‽ OK then. (Though don’t say I didn’t warn you…) I recommend starting with Dixon and Aikhenvald’s Serial Verb Constructions: A Cross-linguistic Typology, if you can find it. It’s a bit long, but you really only need the first chapter, which summarises the basics of SVCs. You’ll probably be interested in Chapter 15 as well — it gives an overview of Wolaitta, which looks similar to Jin in that it also uses ‘converbs’ with similarities to SVCs.I'll take at these, too, out of curiosity. That list will be helpful to wrap my head around types of serial constructions.bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Oct 17, 2020 9:03 am Yep, this all sounds pretty normal for SVCs. (Your system reminds me of Skou in particular, which has similar differences in concord between its various inflectional categories.)
‘Direct result’ is very common in SVCs. Usually it’s accomplished through switching subjects, along the lines of ‘He hit die it = He hit it; it die’. ‘Simultaneous actions’ seems a bit less common, though still attested. ‘Whole, connected event’ is a very common constraint on SVCs — often the event is restricted to a culturally common one.
If you’re looking for more inspiration, here’s some other common categories:
I don't think I explained this particularly well.
When I say "at the start of a sentence", I mean the entire cluster of verbs that make up the serial verb construction. Instead of saying "at the start of a sentence", maybe that should be "before the arguments". I haven't directly & consciously thought about this, but I think as soon as you introduce the arguments - using any pronoun like qam, ja, qasim, jida, etc. - you then need to use a the linker to "tie" a new phrase back to the main verb.
k'alisi miba qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi |
k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi almiba |
mibanun k'alisi qam umbabiwi ja nsatimi |
Fronted adverb |
Main verb and/or SVC |
Interjected adverb |
Arguments (pronouns & their dependent phrases) |
Adverbial/adjunct phrases |
HAH!bradrn wrote: ↑Sun Oct 18, 2020 1:00 am You actually want to investigate this stuff‽ OK then. (Though don’t say I didn’t warn you…) I recommend starting with Dixon and Aikhenvald’s Serial Verb Constructions: A Cross-linguistic Typology, if you can find it. It’s a bit long, but you really only need the first chapter, which summarises the basics of SVCs. You’ll probably be interested in Chapter 15 as well — it gives an overview of Wolaitta, which looks similar to Jin in that it also uses ‘converbs’ with similarities to SVCs.
OK, that’s a lot clearer now, thanks! (Turns out I’d completely misinterpreted what you were saying: somehow I managed to conclude that you could move the entire verb complex out of sentence-initial position, in which case you need to add al-. Which of course makes no sense!)
Excellent!
Yeah, either would probably work. I'll just need to read up a little more on both and decide which term will describe the situation best. Right now, I lean towards calling the grouped verb that come before the arguments "SVC", and any that come after the arguments (using al-) would be "converbs".
I'm not sure what you mean here. Could you explain?