Conlang fluency thread

[jal]

Mi finis don cata 6 a Obit Ya, "Ota Skilat ina Faya". Yu me luk im de ya.
I finished chapter 6 of the Hobbit, "Out of the Frying Pan into the Fire". You can see it here.


JAL

[hwhatting]

Mi finis don cata 6 a Obit Ya, "Ota Skilat ina Faya". Yu me luk im de ya.
I finished chapter 6 of the Hobbit, "Out of the Frying Pan into the Fire". You can see it here.

Hú! Fa yaic fex hefuluncas parfortai? To's parpulun wargun.
wow! INT already six chapter-PL.ACC translate-2SG.RES.ACT ? That-N.SG.NOM be-3SG.PRES.ACT.CLIT very.much-N.SG.NOM work-SG.NOM
Wow! Did you already translate six chapters? That's a lot of work!

[xxx]

sr|¿½bd
(13 to work on in the future necessarily...)
13 more to go...

[Glass Half Baked]

Pirenáj: Tent traducír a la Pirenáj, peróc tap mout de lo tempos.
[tə̃t tɾad.du.'s̻iɾ a la pi.ɾə.'naʒ pə.'ɾɵk tap mot de lo 'tə̃.po]
I try to translate into Pirenáj, but it takes a lot of time.

[jal]

Wow! Did you already translate six chapters? That's a lot of work!

Me mek, an ye, olip wohk fo so :D
I did, and yes, quite some work :D.
(And I need to revisit the older chapters, as I started about five years ago, and the grammar has been changed an augmented, though most will still be ok. But that didn't stop me from starting with chapter 7 :).)

EDIT: I just found notes in chapter one dating from 2017, so apparently I've been going a little longer :D.


JAL

[xxx]

@m¹n¦¤§cµ©9¨¤¸Fn¦¤§n¤¸+¦
(smile given by activities not quick and whose gift not providing food...)
the advantage of free activities is that there's no urgency; on the contrary, the time spent increases the pleasure produced...

[Travis B.]

Ék ĩ dàeim yän mà thĩung ga màe.
[ʔɛ́k ʔḭ dæ̀im jɑ̤n mɑ̀ tʰɨ̰ŋ ɡɑ̄ mæ̀]
1S should play more INST language PROX.S EGO
I should play with this language more.

[Travis B.]

Niwanĩ ẽe yän thĩung ga ho lae ék thäe nyẽu màe.
[niwɐnḭ ʔɛ̰ː jɑ̤n tʰɨ̰ŋ ɡɑ̄ hɔ̄ lǣ ʔɛ́k tʰæ̤ ɲɘ̰ mæ̀]
tone.GROUP DAT more language PROX.S than COMP 1S able.to speak EGO
This language has more tones than I can pronounce.

[Travis B.]

Pirenáj: Tento traducír a la Pirenáj, peróc tap mout tempos.
[tə̃.to tɾa.du.s̻iɾ a la pi.ɾə.naʃ pə.ɾɵk tap mot tə̃.po]
I try to translate into Pirenáj, but it takes a lot of time.

Phàang óo ũ thĩung ruman ngá líu tàe sí.
[pʰɑ̀ːŋ ʔɔ́ː ʔṵ tʰɨ̰ŋ ɾʊmɑ̄n ŋɑ́ lɨ́ tæ̀ sí]
kind what POSS.3S language Romance COP DIST.S CLASS DIR
What kind of Romance language is that?

[Glass Half Baked]

Yet una lengua Romana de Uest, deisde las vessances de los Pirineos de nord. Cre que yet levemént avoreda.
/jet `un.na `lɨ̃g.gwa ɾɵ.`man.na de wɨs̺t `deis̺.de las̺ vɨ.`s̺ã.s̻e de lɵs̺ pi.ɾi.`ne.o de nɵɾd... kɾe ke jet lɨ.vɨ.`mɨ̃t a.vɵ.`ɾɨd.da/
It's a Western Romance language, from the slopes of the northern Pyrenees. I think it's a little boring.

[xxx]

Niwanĩ ẽe yän thĩung ga ho lae ék thäe nyẽu màe.

g½±Ùµ~Tg½±h®À¬Nl¬_i
(language in the mind, that language impossible-to-hear and addressed to no one...)
imaginary languages don't need to be spoken because they're not addressed to anyone...

[jal]

I think it's a little boring.

Fo taym dol me fayn.
Boring can sometimes be fine.


JAL

[Travis B.]

• equals, copula, ta
• language variety, fad'a
• to bore, qham
• bad, yoh
• to mean, wanni
• just, merely, sun

Wanniziyet'a sun ha qhamaniziye fad'a ha taye yoh.
mean-AGT.3.S.INAN-PRES-NEG merely COMP bore-APSS-AGT.3.S.INAN-PRES language COMP COP-PRES bad
Just because a language is boring does not mean it is bad.

[Travis B.]

• new, gani

Taye zo fad'ama gani.
COP-PRES PROX.S.INAN language-POSS.1.S new
This is my new language.

[Travis B.]

• sky, siima
• give, yaalu
• things (coll.), d'at
• myriad, yiseka
• nurture, wohade
• humankind, gaare
• have, own, possess, enna
• good, wot
• return, eeta
• die, t'aw

Yaaludinuya siima d'at yiseka ha wohadetafa gaare.
give-DAT-HAB-PAT.3.P.INAN sky things myriad COMP nuture-PASS-PAT.3.S.ANIM humankind

Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate ha eetatadi siiman.
have-DAT-HAB-NEG humankind things-SING COMP return-PASS-DAT sky-ACC

T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
die-CAUS die-CAUS die-CAUS die-CAUS die-CAUS die-CAUS die-CAUS

[jal]

Yu kip way Ingles sentms.
You omitted the English sentence.


JAL

[Znex]

At leuthes oʒsa atsʒen harthle bedruiccet, cens thasʒen aull ret?
It also sounds rather depressing, are you feeling okay?

Ʒe feʒn me tha niʒe tung saik ennae.
I do like your new language all the same.

[bradrn]

Yu kip way Ingles sentms.
You omitted the English sentence.

At leuthes oʒsa atsʒen harthle bedruiccet, cens thasʒen aull ret?
It also sounds rather depressing, are you feeling okay?

Stili anwase we ni towraŋwgiŋ. (Nortaneous sof Hallow XIII ner rŋay ntaŋwarwoŋsesi.)
[stiˈli.an.wa.se.we.ni tow.raŋˈwɟiŋ | ‘Nortaneous’ sof ‘Hallow XIII’ neʒ ʒŋaj.ntaŋ.waɾ.woŋˈse.si]
stili an-wa·se we ni to-wraŋ-wgi·ŋ. Nortaneous sof Hallow XIII rŋay ner m-taŋ-wa·rw·oŋ·ses-i
‘stele’ AGT-AUX·die seven FOC DEF.SG-seem-be. Nortaneous and Hallow XIII FOC.also ACC.3s BK-DEF.PL-AUX·like-3s.

It looks like the Seven Kill Stele. (Nortaneous and Hallow XIII also like it.)

(A more accurate translation of that last verb complex would be something like, ’while they also like it alongside him’, but that’s not really idiomatic English. You could just say [eŋeyner] taŋrwoŋsesi if you wanted to be closer to the translation.)

[hwhatting]

You omitted the English sentence.

To's ta warra toyais colunais nómunatais "seftun func", pa fú frúgita warraifis pró parfortiai cér protar.
that-N.SG.NOM be-3SG.PRES.ACT.CLIT ART-N.PL.NOM word-PL.NOM ART-F.SG.GEN column-SG.GEN call-PRTC.PAST.PASS.F.SG.GEN seven kill-IMPV.2SG, REL-N.PL.NOM be-3SG.PAST.INACT use-PRTC.PAST.PASS.N.PL.NOM word-PL.INSTR for translation-SG.DAT here before
It's the text of the "Seven-Kill-Stele", which has been used as a translation text here before.

EDIT: Ninja'd by bradrn

[Travis B.]

• surprise (trans.), coxi
• need (trans.), mag
• explain (trans.), lehha
• seven, yola
• stele, monolith, siga

Coxitaleeyema ha magta ha lehhataye ha ta siga t'awraadat yola.
surprise-PASS-INST-PRES-PAT.1.S COMP need-PASS COMP explain-PASS-PRES COMP COP stele die-CAUS-ACTION-GEN seven
I am surprised that it needed explanation that that was the Seven Kill Stele.