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bradrn wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 9:46 pm
Travis B. wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 8:45 pm
bradrn wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 7:05 pm No, they’re saying ‘there is a time and a place to use certain registers, and this is not one of them’. Which I agree with.
They specifically said that educational and journalistic texts should be written like "casual speech" (to quote), i.e. in a low register. How we are writing right now is not like casual speech at all, rather it is a rather formalized written register. Probably the only allowance for lower-register features in our writing here is common, rather standardized contractions (and this is not really lower-register either, as many of the very common contractions found in everyday speech do not typically feature in our writing here).
I’m not so sure. I wrote my Master’s thesis in a style which my supervisor described as ‘conversational’, and everyone seemed to like it a lot. IIRC, the feedback from reviewers was that it was easy to read.

More generally, I feel that the English ‘high register’ admits a considerable amount of variation. We just don’t see a lot of it because, frankly, most people are terrible writers. (This applies especially to papers in the sciences.) But it is definitely possible to remain in a formalised register while keeping the text easy to read. It doesn’t necessarily involve importing features directly from casual speech — or even using contractions — but rather in avoiding features which are exclusive to high register, which I presume is what Starbeam meant by ‘ornamental language’.

EDIT: I should give some examples of those ‘features which are exclusive to high register’. Off the top of my head, they include: replacement of common words (especially verbs) by uncommon ones; greater frequency of the passive voice and other impersonal constructions; greater use of acronyms and symbols; highly embedded clause structures. I’m sure we can think of more if we try.
To me the literary language is typically 'high register', except in cases such as intentionally informal writing ('hafta', 'gonna', 'gotta', 'woulda', 'coulda', 'shoulda', 'sposta', 'kinda', 'sorta', and like*, for instance), literal direct quotations that seek to preserve actual speech verbatim, the use of interjections such as 'yeah', 'well', 'nah', and like, forms such as 'thing is...', and similarly uses of words such as 'thing' and 'stuff' in a quasi-pronominal fashion. All of the posts here are primarily 'high register', for instance, even ones written in a 'plain' or 'conversational' tone, with the exception of the latter three types of forms which are used commonly where they would be avoided in more literary writing.

* And even these are rather formalized; for instance these are not reflective of my own speech, where all of these are subject to further elision and assimilation processes not reflected even in informal writing (with the exception of 'I am going to' > 'I'ma' where the final 'a' reflects a long nasal schwa).

Of course, as you say, there are variations in the literary 'high register'. For instance, there is the often-nearly-unreadable hyper-high register a lot of scientific papers are written in, as you mention, on one hand, and the register that forum posts like those here are commonly written in here that I mentioned above, on the other hand. But that does not mean that they reflect speech even when common tics of markedly high registers are avoided. I think that written language that avoids these things should not be compared with "casual speech" because it really is not it at all.

For instance, it is far more homogeneous across all of English than casual speech is. Even in the register of forum posts the main hints that everyone is not from the same corner of the Anglosphere, aside from English dialect discussion, is things such as -'ize' versus -'ise' and word choice differences such as 'parking lot' versus 'car park'. But these are rather minor in the greater scheme of things. There are no hints of my dialect except that I am most likely an American from my non-linguistic posts here, for instance, and even these hints are easy to overlook. Even the language of forum posts is highly standardized when one takes these minor details into account. (Most of the idiosyncrasies are actually really about things such as capitalization, punctuation, and like more than the underlying language except for possibly the tendency of some posters to write in very long, complex sentences that can be a pain to tease apart.)

Likewise, it is easy to understand by non-native English-speakers who may have little contact with everyday speech by actual native English-speakers. Conversely, non-native English-speakers can be readily understood by native English-speakers who would likely have at least some modest difficulties if they met in Real Life. The main exceptions to this are the frequent use by some of expressions from certain corners of the Anglosphere, particularly India, which are not readily understood in the Anglosphere in general. (Yes, I mean "kindly do the needful".)

There is no real concept of "accent" in it, as it is largely a written register and not a transcription of speech. Take for instance, someone from Scotland who natively speaks in Scots at home writing in this register of English on the Internet being very readily understood by English-speakers who have never been on the same continent as Scotland, whereas if they even attempted to write in a more direct transcription of Scottish English (much the less actual Scots) they would have difficulties being understood. Contrast this with, say, the IRC Berlinisch (which could be mistaken for Low German to the uninitiated) I am familiar with from my activist days of long ago, frequently using spellings such as 'ick' for StG 'ich', 'nich' for StG 'nicht', 'Tach' for StG 'Tag', and so on.

Consequently, we can say that forum English, for instance, even when it is 'plain' is still strictly a pan-Anglospheric written register and not reflective of anyone's actual speech. This is probably a good thing, because it enables widespread communication that would likely be far more difficult if we all tried to emulate our speech in writing. I remember deliberately writing in very informal English in IRC ages ago (I was intentionally pushing trying to bring written English closer to spoken English) and confusing non-native English-speakers to no end who were not familiar with actual spoken English. These days, even in IRC, I largely write like I do here, which is probably for the best.
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I don't think English really has a way of indicating low register in writing. AAVE text speech (like "iono") probably is closest.
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Travis B. wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 11:56 pm the tendency of some posters to write in very long, complex sentences that can be a pain to tease apart.
Have I been found out so soon? (In other words, sorry, this is me)
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Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:56 am
Travis B. wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 11:56 pm the tendency of some posters to write in very long, complex sentences that can be a pain to tease apart.
Have I been found out so soon? (In other words, sorry, this is me)
I doubt it was you Travis was thinking about :)

As for Starbeam's point... There is something to it, I think.
There's register and register too. I think it's possible to write clearly in an elevated register.

I think there's a tendency for writers, journalists, pundists, activist and the like to, so to speak, beat up their opponents with excessive flourishes. And, often, to hide unoriginal or frankly wrong ideas behind verbiage.
One example that comes to mind is Mencius Moldbug. (Though historically Marxists could be good at that game.)
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Darren wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:26 am I don't think English really has a way of indicating low register in writing. AAVE text speech (like "iono") probably is closest.
I have to resort to ad-hoc forms such as 'I onno' when I do want to specifically capture actual speech forms in, say, IRC. And that is just ordinary, everyday speech (actually saying 'I don't know' /aɪ doʊnt noʊ/ is rather high-register for speech).
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Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:56 am
Travis B. wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 11:56 pm the tendency of some posters to write in very long, complex sentences that can be a pain to tease apart.
Have I been found out so soon? (In other words, sorry, this is me)
No, I wasn't thinking of you there. :)
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Ares Land wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 3:31 am As for Starbeam's point... There is something to it, I think.
There's register and register too. I think it's possible to write clearly in an elevated register.

I think there's a tendency for writers, journalists, pundists, activist and the like to, so to speak, beat up their opponents with excessive flourishes. And, often, to hide unoriginal or frankly wrong ideas behind verbiage.
One example that comes to mind is Mencius Moldbug. (Though historically Marxists could be good at that game.)
I agree that it is possible to write in a higher register yet write with clarity. In particular, I personally do find it that sometimes people needlessly use obscure words (as mentioned, generally verbs) just because they can and not because they actually add anything to their writing; they could improve their writing by avoiding such things.
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Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 11:26 am
Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:56 am
Travis B. wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 11:56 pm the tendency of some posters to write in very long, complex sentences that can be a pain to tease apart.
Have I been found out so soon? (In other words, sorry, this is me)
No, I wasn't thinking of you there. :)
Oh, thanks. I must have somehow managed to avoid that tendency on here then. That's nice
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Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 12:03 pm
Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 11:26 am
Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:56 am
Have I been found out so soon? (In other words, sorry, this is me)
No, I wasn't thinking of you there. :)
Oh, thanks. I must have somehow managed to avoid that tendency on here then. That's nice
You just use copious footnotes. :)
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Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 12:07 pm
Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 12:03 pm
Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 11:26 am
No, I wasn't thinking of you there. :)
Oh, thanks. I must have somehow managed to avoid that tendency on here then. That's nice
You just use copious footnotes. :)
That is a conscious choice¹, and probably one I'm a bit too attached to

¹ Footnotes are just so fun to write². I can't help myself
² And necessary³. Where else should I put information that might get in the way of the post but I want to include for whatever reason
³ Although I'll admit I'm doing these ones just for the sake of it, as an illustration of the fact. It is still just the kind of thing I'd do though
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It's nice to have a distinctive personal style.
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Ares Land wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 3:31 am
Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:56 am
Travis B. wrote: Thu Dec 05, 2024 11:56 pm the tendency of some posters to write in very long, complex sentences that can be a pain to tease apart.
Have I been found out so soon? (In other words, sorry, this is me)
I doubt it was you Travis was thinking about :)

As for Starbeam's point... There is something to it, I think.
There's register and register too. I think it's possible to write clearly in an elevated register.

I think there's a tendency for writers, journalists, pundists, activist and the like to, so to speak, beat up their opponents with excessive flourishes. And, often, to hide unoriginal or frankly wrong ideas behind verbiage.
One example that comes to mind is Mencius Moldbug. (Though historically Marxists could be good at that game.)
This seems to have gotten a bit out of hand, but I realize I should explain myself better. Ares Land basically hits the nail on the head for what I was to say. By casual, i mean without flourishes, not necessarily low register.

For example, Wikipedia writes in a clearly high register, yet, I think their writing is actually very legible. It has some key drawbacks: namely, they're against contractions and urge Official Names for events/ ideas/ etc.. But that's still far ahead of the pack, most have those two issues with the added benefit of thinking political theory or journalism is any place to write chants, poetry, storytelling anecdotes, or indirect "communication". And writing the same way over and over means you're a tape recorder. That isn't learning, that is obedience. If Wikipedia doesn't count as an example, quite a few linguistic theses do, and I've had little trouble reading them as long as I could look up concepts I haven't heard of.

Low registers can still be obfuscative and masturbatory. (Over)use of slang, jargon, emotive language, emojis, wordplay, and the occasional imprecise phrase is absolutely bullshit. It might seem like I have many different kinds of diction gripes, but to me they nearly all fall under the category of "beautified language before clear language". The gripe about ornamental language isn't register formality, it's people trying to put on a show during their writing, making it expressive not educative. I'm not speaking about other communication issues like being long-winded, either. That does suck, but I feel people are already fighting the good fight.

If all of this is you, alright, I never said to stop. I asked for more understanding of why I misunderstand/ find it obnoxious. And for me to get/ make sources for people cut from my cloth. Don't get me started on multitudes of people how talking in the exact same manner for political topics looks rather suspicious.

Also, TravisB, you're blocked. Leave me alone please, or I'm getting the mods.
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Starbeam wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 1:47 pm Also, TravisB, you're blocked. Leave me alone please, or I'm getting the mods.
That's not very nice. And what did I do to you (even if you don't read this directly, you might see it in other people's quotes)?
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Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:17 pm What did I do to you (even if you don't read this directly, you might see it in other people's quotes)?
I'm quoting this because it wasn't obvious to me on a cursory rereading. Starbeam, I don't mean to pressure you by quoting, but I thought you should be aware Travis doesn't know what he's done to offend you; Zompist/other mods, if getting in the middle of this is somehow out of line, please let me know and I'll stop.
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Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:32 pm
Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:17 pm What did I do to you (even if you don't read this directly, you might see it in other people's quotes)?
I'm quoting this because it wasn't obvious to me on a cursory rereading. Starbeam, I don't mean to pressure you by quoting, but I thought you should be aware Travis doesn't know what he's done to offend you; Zompist/other mods, if getting in the middle of this is somehow out of line, please let me know and I'll stop.
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You're all fine. As for blocking TravisB, it was a bit ago for other reasons. I didn't mean to start a fight, I apologize. It seems the board's software doesn't tell people I'm blocking them
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Starbeam wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:38 pm As for blocking TravisB, it was a bit ago for other reasons.
I have no idea of what you're referring to here.
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Both parties should try to calm down.

Also, (points to sign) this is the venting thread, the idea is to vent. There's no board rule about not arguing about someone else's vent, but it's discouraged.
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Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:32 pm
Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:17 pm What did I do to you (even if you don't read this directly, you might see it in other people's quotes)?
I'm quoting this because it wasn't obvious to me on a cursory rereading. Starbeam, I don't mean to pressure you by quoting, but I thought you should be aware Travis doesn't know what he's done to offend you; Zompist/other mods, if getting in the middle of this is somehow out of line, please let me know and I'll stop.
Speaking for myself (Mark and I haven't discussed this at all), I would say this kind of action should be discouraged. There are all sorts of possible motives for blocking an individual, but at the end of the day it's an attempt to enforce a boundary, often a very personal one. You are not entitled to an explanation of what this boundary is or why this person decided they needed to establish it at this time and in this way. Yeah, it sucks to know that someone has blocked you--moreso if you don't know why--but there are probably few worse ways to get them to reconsider or proffer an explanation than to disrespect that boundary.
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Linguoboy wrote: Mon Dec 09, 2024 3:11 pm
Lērisama wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:32 pm
Travis B. wrote: Fri Dec 06, 2024 2:17 pm What did I do to you (even if you don't read this directly, you might see it in other people's quotes)?
I'm quoting this because it wasn't obvious to me on a cursory rereading. Starbeam, I don't mean to pressure you by quoting, but I thought you should be aware Travis doesn't know what he's done to offend you; Zompist/other mods, if getting in the middle of this is somehow out of line, please let me know and I'll stop.
Speaking for myself (Mark and I haven't discussed this at all), I would say this kind of action should be discouraged. There are all sorts of possible motives for blocking an individual, but at the end of the day it's an attempt to enforce a boundary, often a very personal one. You are not entitled to an explanation of what this boundary is or why this person decided they needed to establish it at this time and in this way. Yeah, it sucks to know that someone has blocked you--moreso if you don't know why--but there are probably few worse ways to get them to reconsider or proffer an explanation than to disrespect that boundary.
Noted, thank you
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I was not previously aware of being blocked (and had read his post as saying that he was blocking me right then and there, not that he already had me blocked), and was bothered by what seemed to be an incongruously-extreme reaction to an otherwise-civil discussion, particularly the threat to bring in the mods, which seemed inappropriate and borderline-manipulative (as if I am not supposed to discuss his posts at all just because he says so or else he will complain).
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