I am really bad at looking at fine print. my bad again./nɑtɛndəːduːd/ wrote: ↑Wed Feb 12, 2025 6:30 pmoops. I just realized that this post is from 7 years ago. my bad
though I am curious, what are you writing about?
I am really bad at looking at fine print. my bad again./nɑtɛndəːduːd/ wrote: ↑Wed Feb 12, 2025 6:30 pmoops. I just realized that this post is from 7 years ago. my bad
Problem is, I already have a pretty clear idea of what the characters and themes are supposed to be for the whole story.rotting bones wrote: ↑Wed Feb 12, 2025 6:35 pmOne advice I heard is to break the stream of the narrative by introducing new themes and/or characters. Easier said than done.
First contact with aliens in a mostly utopian future Earth, as seen from the perspective of a fairly minor participant for whom the whole things coincides with coming of age.
If you're sure that's what you want to write, wouldn't you have written it already? Consider the possibility that you are bored with your preconceived plot. It might help to explore the story from another angle. If the subplot gets boring later, you can merge it with the main plot or kill it off GRR Martin style.
That's really messed up. Good luck.Man in Space wrote: ↑Sat Feb 15, 2025 2:47 pm I have a colonoscopy on Tuesday. The insurance is balking at covering the voiding agent. It’s not like I have a disease that can cause cancer (and it’s not like I’ve already dodged that bullet once), am I right? (/s)
Also, the insurance had better actually cover the procedure this time. Last time thanks to a snafu somewhere I ended up paying six kilodollars or so out of my own pocket.
sasasha wrote: ↑Sun Feb 16, 2025 6:12 pm Good luck, Man In Space.
I hit a depression after the initial shock of losing my friend. This is fine and natural and I’m ok. But I’m so unfocused. My brother came to stay and I could barely think what to say to him. It’s easy to just want time to float away in whatever fashion it most easily can, very hard to put demands into that time; practically everything I demand of myself is failing rn, so I think I just have to wait until my motivation system is up and running again (as much as it ever is). I need to job hunt because this grief was like drinking a truth serum and suddenly I was just like hell no, I am not doing this about one of my jobs. So I do need to find some focused willpower soon, or being able to pay rent will start to float away in whatever fashion it most easily can, too!
In the meantime, here has been fun and helpful, thanks y’all.
Not sure if this post I put in the contradictory feelings thread helps much, but I saw your post and thought I'd put it here, too. hope things get better./nɒtɛndəduːd/ wrote: ↑Sat Feb 15, 2025 12:48 pm I have never really been close to even the people I've been the closest to, and so I understand where it is that you come from. it is good to mourn those who have passed, for then we will not forget who they were and what they did for those around them, but at the end of the day, death is a thing for us all. at a point, you have to let them pass. (I'm not saying this is advise strictly for you, Raphael, but for anyone it might reach.)
Good luck getting that sorted out.rotting bones wrote: ↑Thu Feb 20, 2025 7:29 pm A lot of packages I need seem to be missing from Maven Central.
Ah, that feeling. I'll try to send you motivation.