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And you're trolling.Glass Half Baked wrote: ↑Mon Nov 24, 2025 6:11 pm Hey, did y'all know that if you own Mark hard enough, he deletes your post? I think he might secretly be J D Vance.
The closest I've actually read is the Player of Games, where both the monarch and the woke society were technologically advanced. The thing is that with technological advancement, it becomes easier to argue that everyone should have more, even if leaders don't implement these policies.Raphael wrote: ↑Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:10 pm Actually, I think trying to come up with at least half-way plausible ways how a society or at least community in a world with medieval technology might end up with somewhat modern sensibilities, woke or not, and might try to defend itself against attempts by the nearest king or emperor to destroy it before it gives his subjects any ideas, might be a seriously interesting conworlding challenge.
The two names that come to mind are The Priory of the Orange Tree and Jemisin's Broken Earth series, neither of which I've read. Jemisin's Broken Earth is explicitly said to have complex villains, but I don't remember its tech level.Lērisama wrote: ↑Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:14 pm Both have been done. I don't want to be the one to induct you into the world of YA fantasy¹², but a quick google search will reveal many books of, err…, questionable quality, and after you've sifted through the Hunger Games rewrites of highly variable quality, you will find some LOTR rewrites of varying quality.
¹ Teenagers from about 14–15 up to adults
² YA is a bigger market, so publishers try to put anything they can into it, so “repeats of a thing we know there's a geeky teenage fandom for” fits into that category.
Edit: I fear none of them will even attempt Raphael's standard. The villain is almost certainly a stereotypical EEVIL villain of EVIL™, rather than a coherent character.
I haven't read that that one, so I can't comment. Should I add it to my list?¹rotting bones wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 4:40 pmThe closest I've actually read is the Player of Games, where both the monarch and the woke society were technologically advanced. The thing is that with technological advancement, it becomes easier to argue that everyone should have more, even if leaders don't implement these policies.Raphael wrote: ↑Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:10 pm Actually, I think trying to come up with at least half-way plausible ways how a society or at least community in a world with medieval technology might end up with somewhat modern sensibilities, woke or not, and might try to defend itself against attempts by the nearest king or emperor to destroy it before it gives his subjects any ideas, might be a seriously interesting conworlding challenge.
I've read Priory, which is actually quite well done historically speaking², and I enjoyed it. It doesn't quite fit into Raphael's requests, because firstly, it's a retelling of St George and the Dragon rather than LOTR, and so it's (main) villain is supernatural³, and secondly because the focus is very much on the upper classes⁷⁸. The main sign of modernity it's its attitude towards sex and gender, which is utopian¹¹, pretty much everywhere, and so is also useless for Raphael's question.The two names that come to mind are The Priory of the Orange Tree and Jemisin's Broken Earth series, neither of which I've read. Jemisin's Broken Earth is explicitly said to have complex villains, but I don't remember its tech level.Lērisama wrote: ↑Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:14 pm Both have been done. I don't want to be the one to induct you into the world of YA fantasy¹², but a quick google search will reveal many books of, err…, questionable quality, and after you've sifted through the Hunger Games rewrites of highly variable quality, you will find some LOTR rewrites of varying quality.
¹ Teenagers from about 14–15 up to adults
² YA is a bigger market, so publishers try to put anything they can into it, so “repeats of a thing we know there's a geeky teenage fandom for” fits into that category.
Edit: I fear none of them will even attempt Raphael's standard. The villain is almost certainly a stereotypical EEVIL villain of EVIL™, rather than a coherent character.
Hasn't "dragon" been a metaphor for oppressive kings?Lērisama wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 5:09 pm I've read Priory, which is actually quite well done historically speaking², and I enjoyed it. It doesn't quite fit into Raphael's requests, because firstly, it's a retelling of St George and the Dragon rather than LOTR, and so it's (main) villain is supernatural³, and secondly because the focus is very much on the upper classes⁷⁸. The main sign of modernity it's its attitude towards sex and gender, which is utopian¹¹, pretty much everywhere, and so is also useless for Raphael's question.
The original post by alice you were responding to doesn't mention kings.Lērisama wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 5:09 pm I've read Priory, which is actually quite well done historically speaking², and I enjoyed it. It doesn't quite fit into Raphael's requests, because firstly, it's a retelling of St George and the Dragon rather than LOTR, and so it's (main) villain is supernatural³, and secondly because the focus is very much on the upper classes⁷⁸. The main sign of modernity it's its attitude towards sex and gender, which is utopian¹¹, pretty much everywhere, and so is also useless for Raphael's question.
Yes. That makes sense in the story. You could definitely make an argument that the dragons act to the main characters just as they would to their social inferiors. Not perfectly, but there are things that make me think his was intended.rotting bones wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 5:31 pmHasn't "dragon" been a metaphor for oppressive kings?Lērisama wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 5:09 pm I've read Priory, which is actually quite well done historically speaking², and I enjoyed it. It doesn't quite fit into Raphael's requests, because firstly, it's a retelling of St George and the Dragon rather than LOTR, and so it's (main) villain is supernatural³, and secondly because the focus is very much on the upper classes⁷⁸. The main sign of modernity it's its attitude towards sex and gender, which is utopian¹¹, pretty much everywhere, and so is also useless for Raphael's question.
I don't know of any exact fits. I haven't even read the most famous works of woke fantasy. Jemisin could be a fit depending on the tech level. Of the works I've consumed, the closest fit is Shrek.
True, but “they've all been like this since time immemorial” also doesn't really answer the question, so I ignored that aspect.rotting bones wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 5:42 pmThe original post by alice you were responding to doesn't mention kings.Lērisama wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 5:09 pm I've read Priory, which is actually quite well done historically speaking², and I enjoyed it. It doesn't quite fit into Raphael's requests, because firstly, it's a retelling of St George and the Dragon rather than LOTR, and so it's (main) villain is supernatural³, and secondly because the focus is very much on the upper classes⁷⁸. The main sign of modernity it's its attitude towards sex and gender, which is utopian¹¹, pretty much everywhere, and so is also useless for Raphael's question.
Almost certainly yes. It is generally considered a classic of science fiction.
This is how I understood "woke". If you want fiction with full-fledged class analysis, I can't say I have seen a lot of fiction in general that does it well. The only example I can think of at the moment is Ministry for the Future (probably because the dystopia thread reminded me of solarpunk).
Thanks. I'll read that then ay some point.rotting bones wrote: ↑Tue Nov 25, 2025 7:07 pmAlmost certainly yes. It is generally considered a classic of science fiction.
I don't want a fully fledged class analysis, but I also don't not want it. The objection is that all the characters are the rulers and not the ruled – I get it, because characters that can do stuff are more fun to write, and if there's a historical component then there'll be more evidence for them. It just often seems like non-main character suffering is background to rather than part of, the story.This is how I understood "woke". If you want fiction with full-fledged class analysis, I can't say I have seen a lot of fiction in general that does it well. The only example I can think of at the moment is Ministry for the Future (probably because the dystopia thread reminded me of solarpunk).
There was a retelling of LotR (coming out of Russia because of course it did) where Mordor was simply more technologically inclined than the rest of Middle-Earth. There was a relatively recent lawsuit and the whole thing got entered into evidence (though I haven’t actually read it).
This reminds me of the "Black Book of Arda", another(?) Russian project to rewrite the Silmarillion with Morgoth as the good guy who tried to liberate Arda from the tyranny of the Valar. Alas, I never saw even a part of it, only heard of it.Man in Space wrote: ↑Sat Nov 29, 2025 8:36 amThere was a retelling of LotR (coming out of Russia because of course it did) where Mordor was simply more technologically inclined than the rest of Middle-Earth. There was a relatively recent lawsuit and the whole thing got entered into evidence (though I haven’t actually read it).
I have read it many times. It's not woke. It's Voltarian liberal, i.e. soft libertarian. I do recommend it. I might be able to find it in one of my archives if I grep the word "adiabatic".Man in Space wrote: ↑Sat Nov 29, 2025 8:36 amThere was a retelling of LotR (coming out of Russia because of course it did) where Mordor was simply more technologically inclined than the rest of Middle-Earth. There was a relatively recent lawsuit and the whole thing got entered into evidence (though I haven’t actually read it).
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