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a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2023 11:34 am
by CherylTheTGirl
i made a Conlang/Conworld called Sansis, and i kinda wanted to share it :)
it can be found here:
https://cherylcherylcheryl.neocities.org/sansis
thanks for checking it out, if you do.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2023 4:13 pm
by Travis B.
Just a small suggestion - your site would benefit from a non-animated, solid, light-color background; the dark (i.e. low-contrast), textured, animated background makes it very hard to read.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2023 8:15 pm
by bradrn
Travis B. wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 4:13 pm
Just a small suggestion - your site would benefit from a non-animated, solid, light-color background; the dark (i.e. low-contrast), textured, animated background makes it very hard to read.
I agree. At least it’s easy enough to remove.
Also, I had a go at compiling the list of phonemes into a summary table (which BTW is the preferred format here and in linguistic works):
/m n/
/b d ɡ/
/p t k/
/dz dʒ tʃ/
/ɸ s ʃ ħ/
/β w j/
/l ɾ r/
/ɑ ɛ i̝ ɵ ɯ/
I haven’t tried to understand the section on grammar, but here’s some feedback/questions on the phonology:
- I like the allophony! It’s something many beginners don’t do well.
- Is there any difference between graphemes ⟨j⟩ and ⟨zh⟩? If not, why do you need both of them?
- Similarly, is it possible to distinguish ⟨b⟩ and ⟨v⟩ word-medially?
- What kind of syllable structure does this language have?
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2023 1:38 pm
by chris_notts
Is there a little bit of Japanese inspiration to the verb morphology? Obviously it's not the same, but I got the feeling that there might be a bit of that in the mix.
Incidentally, there's a cool addressee distinction from Basque that you might be interested in: traditionally many verbs agree with the gender of the addressee, but only if there's an informal/familiar relationship with the speaker. See:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Basque_ve ... ces_(hika)
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2023 5:01 pm
by Moose-tache
bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 8:15 pm
I agree. At least it’s easy enough to remove.
Care to explain?
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 12:40 am
by bradrn
Moose-tache wrote: ↑Sun Jun 25, 2023 5:01 pm
bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 8:15 pm
I agree. At least it’s easy enough to remove.
Care to explain?
Right-click, press ‘Inspect element’, and remove the
background-image from the
<body> tag.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 4:36 am
by WeepingElf
bradrn wrote: ↑Mon Jun 26, 2023 12:40 am
Moose-tache wrote: ↑Sun Jun 25, 2023 5:01 pm
bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 8:15 pm
I agree. At least it’s easy enough to remove.
Care to explain?
Right-click, press ‘Inspect element’, and remove the
background-image from the
<body> tag.
Thank you, I didn't know of this feature before! But in this case, the resulting greyish blue background is too dark.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 6:42 am
by KathTheDragon
WeepingElf wrote: ↑Mon Jun 26, 2023 4:36 am
bradrn wrote: ↑Mon Jun 26, 2023 12:40 am
Moose-tache wrote: ↑Sun Jun 25, 2023 5:01 pm
Care to explain?
Right-click, press ‘Inspect element’, and remove the
background-image from the
<body> tag.
Thank you, I didn't know of this feature before! But in this case, the resulting greyish blue background is too dark.
Also remove the
background-color attribute in the CSS (or change its value to something else)
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 10:46 am
by WeepingElf
Of course!
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 6:14 pm
by Imralu
The nineties called and it wants its website design back. I don’t want to risk reading that. It feels like it could give me a migraine. I’m on my phone, so I can’t do any of the things suggested above to mitigate the sheer awfulness of the page’s appearance.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 8:57 pm
by Emily
don't listen to everyone whining about the background, it rules
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 4:14 am
by xxx
Emily wrote: ↑Mon Jun 26, 2023 8:57 pm
don't listen to everyone whining about the background, it rules
+1
a non-human appearance for a non-human race...
more immersive drawings...
more exotic detail...
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 4:53 am
by WeepingElf
Also, the font is very grainy, which doesn't make reading easier.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 5:17 am
by bradrn
I know I also said I disliked the formatting, but do we really all need to pile on and complain about it this much? The formatting is the least important part of the conlang (and I say this as someone who is very much a perfectionist about formatting).
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 9:43 am
by Imralu
bradrn wrote: ↑Tue Jun 27, 2023 5:17 am
I know I also said I disliked the formatting, but do we really all need to pile on and complain about it this much? The formatting is the least important part of the conlang (and I say this as someone who is very much a perfectionist about formatting).
It's literally preventing me from reading it.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 10:42 am
by WeepingElf
bradrn wrote: ↑Tue Jun 27, 2023 5:17 am
I know I also said I disliked the formatting, but do we really all need to pile on and complain about it this much? The formatting is the least important part of the conlang (and I say this as someone who is very much a perfectionist about formatting).
Fair. Let's not embark more on the
presentation, but focus more on the
content. Alas, I have little to say about that, except that it looks like the work of a beginner. That's fine, of course - we all did rather unsophisticated worlds and languages when we were young.
EDIT: This very post is my post #1000 on this incarnation of the ZBB.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 5:30 pm
by evmdbm
WeepingElf wrote: ↑Tue Jun 27, 2023 10:42 am
Alas, I have little to say about that, except that it looks like the work of a beginner. That's fine, of course - we all did rather unsophisticated worlds and languages when we were young.
And it does take a little bit of guts to chuck it out there not knowing what people will say.... Personally I'm intrigued by cat-demon combinations. Our dog probably thinks all cats are demonic already mind
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2023 6:22 am
by CherylTheTGirl
Travis B. wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 4:13 pm
Just a small suggestion - your site would benefit from a non-animated, solid, light-color background; the dark (i.e. low-contrast), textured, animated background makes it very hard to read.
yeah, i'm gonna try add a button that disables the bg, sorry lol
edit: done
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2023 6:32 am
by CherylTheTGirl
bradrn wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 8:15 pm
Travis B. wrote: ↑Sat Jun 24, 2023 4:13 pm
Just a small suggestion - your site would benefit from a non-animated, solid, light-color background; the dark (i.e. low-contrast), textured, animated background makes it very hard to read.
I agree. At least it’s easy enough to remove.
Also, I had a go at compiling the list of phonemes into a summary table (which BTW is the preferred format here and in linguistic works):
/m n/
/b d ɡ/
/p t k/
/dz dʒ tʃ/
/ɸ s ʃ ħ/
/β w j/
/l ɾ r/
/ɑ ɛ i̝ ɵ ɯ/
I haven’t tried to understand the section on grammar, but here’s some feedback/questions on the phonology:
- I like the allophony! It’s something many beginners don’t do well.
- Is there any difference between graphemes ⟨j⟩ and ⟨zh⟩? If not, why do you need both of them?
- Similarly, is it possible to distinguish ⟨b⟩ and ⟨v⟩ word-medially?
- What kind of syllable structure does this language have?
1: thanks!
2: i do not remember why i did that.
3: tbh i got the idea from my native language, spanish, where people mistake them all the time.
4: ehhhhhhh, i think it's CCVCC? i believe klins
(which i shamelessly stole from latin crinis) is a good example.
Re: a small description of my con-stuff
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2023 6:38 am
by CherylTheTGirl
chris_notts wrote: ↑Sun Jun 25, 2023 1:38 pm
Is there a little bit of Japanese inspiration to the verb morphology? Obviously it's not the same, but I got the feeling that there might be a bit of that in the mix.
Incidentally, there's a cool addressee distinction from Basque that you might be interested in: traditionally many verbs agree with the gender of the addressee, but only if there's an informal/familiar relationship with the speaker. See:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Basque_ve ... ces_(hika)
yeah, i'm trying to learn japanese, so there's probably some of that, lol (ameju actually comes from the japanese and chinese words for rain, ame and yu, but sound change eroded most y
s to j
s)
also, hika sounds interesting. i've not yet attempted to learn the language of my northern neighbours, but that's a cool feature.